MPOV: Devil Falls

No one dares to enter Devil Falls - it is a gateway to hell. Even so, a resistance fighter and his daughter need to take this path to escape their enemy. Will they come out alive?

The above taken from https://www.wattpad.com/story/65560067-devil-falls

This is a locally written, 4 part short story on Wattpad. A simple plot on an imaginary place which I find the pace is just right but the ending could have been better. I guess I do prefer a longer, more suspenseful ending instead of a fast and short lived one. Well, it's supposed to be a horror suspense flick :-)

My rating: 3/5
Author: Arthur Foo
Genre: short story, horror, humor, suspense